It was a smile that ended the world
yours, your eyes, and the look in mine
your hand on my neck, a few spoken words
the fuse was lit and
we saw it ignite in
a blast that no one else heard.
The whole thing aflame from a glance and a touch
you fled as it burned while
I stood there and watched the wreckage, entranced
the flames as they danced
the beautiful chaos, the burning expanse
I stood right there and watched the world shake
and all I could see was a giant, heaping
mess of a non-mistake.
another great poem freckles-love this 🙂
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Thank you!! This one took me longer than expected. I love that you love it ❤️
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🙂
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Very good!
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Thank you, John! 😀
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Love your opening line, and really the entire poem is vivid. Felt like I was watching, another fine write!
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Thanks so much, Rob! That’s how I felt writing it 😊
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Very vivid poem. I liked it.
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Thank you so much!
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This is really good. I am new to blogging and am Interested in literature and spoken word and would appreciate it if you could read my work and follow me Thank you for your time. Have a nice day
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